<p>In today's society, we value truth as an unquestionable virtue.Varacity determines a reliability and credibility.However, under certain circumstances,not telling the truth r delaying it leads to better results.</p>
<p>In Jane " Mansfield Park", Fanny Price, the protagonist, highly admires and idolates his brother, Edmund.When Edmund is infatuated with the sophisicated and wordly Miss Crawford,Fanny detects the lack of delicacy and decency in Miss Crawford's disposition.Instead of rushing to her brother and expose Miss Crawford's shortcomings,Fanny decides to suppress the truth because she concludes that the pain brought by her telling the truth is much worse than that brought his discovering it by himself.In this case, truth doesn't alleviate an infatuated person's pain or leads to fully understand the truth.Instead, it exacerbates his embarressment and depression.Suppressing the truth under this circumstance provides some space for the person to comprehend the situation and make the decision with minimum pain inflicted on himself.</p>
<p>is that the whole thing?</p>
<p>umm... needs 3 or 4 more paragraphs.</p>
<p>yeah...i know..i m still uploading hehe</p>
<p>can i use your prompt for my next essay? (looks like we have same problem)</p>
<p>I would tear this apart with Catcher in the Rye...</p>
<p>lots of fancy words</p>
<p>My experience with my friend also proves the benefit of not telling the truth under some circumstances.Last month, I learned that one of my friends got leukemia.When I heard the news, I collapsed.The most urgent question surfaced in my mind, " should I tell her the truth?"Even though leukemia is incurable,and my friend will not live past the end of the year,she will at least enjoy her last days without knowledge about her situation.Truth in this case serves no beneficial purpose other than imposing more pessimism and pain to her.My decision was proven right.She told me that the last months were the best time in her life. Finally, she passed away, but she passed away with hope, serenity and satisfaction.
Telling truth is indeeed a virtue,but certain circumstances prove that suppressing it can lead to many beneficial consequences.</p>
<p>This concludes the essay~ plz grade and give advice.thanx very much</p>
<p>please some comment~</p>
<p>your writing was 130 words stretch it to 400. Add a couple of paragraphs that build up to it or help support it, when in doubt always go for length over any other concern.</p>
<p>u probably only saw the last two paragraphs..the first two posts are part of my essay too</p>
<p>will writing bigger work for the length?? but not too big, cuz graders will easily see that you tried fill up the space.</p>
<p>out of 6 i would give it a 3</p>
<p>You should fill the whole two pages. Add a sentence or two to your conclusion? In your intro. tell what examples you're going to use - literature and personal - and under what circumstances are you exactly talking about. In the conclusion you still say "certain circumstances" after finishing your examples. I'm not sure if you should be using first person in the intro. either. I never use personal experiences, but for your essay, I would either take the friend example and make that the subject of the entire essay with three medium paragraphs...like what exactly made her last days so great. You never show how she passed away with hope, sincerity or satisfaction at all. Make it more descriptive because it doesn't feel very personal.</p>
<p>I think you'd get around 8-9.
You've got nothing to worry about if you write like this on the day of the SAT.
Essay doesn't matter much, anyway.. (as long as you do well on the MC)</p>
<p>I got an 8 on May SAT, and I want to improve to an 11 or 12/what should I do?</p>
<p>all you can do is hope..</p>
<p>Work on your grammar.</p>
<p>Your personal example was a little odd. You knew your friend had leukemia but she did not? It was up to you to decide whether to tell her or not?</p>