URGENT! someone read my UC essay?!

<p>can anyone help me peer edit. It's coming down to like hours before the UC aps are due and I really need to have some people proofread before I send that sucker out. Thanks!!</p>

<p>i'll read!</p>

<p>i will take a look</p>

<p>send away buddy</p>

<p>i can read it</p>