URGENT: very last minute supplement critique

So I am applying as a transfer student to Wellesley and I’m all ready to send in the application but I would just like a little more feedback before I officially submit. I am just a bit worried about the structure of my “Wellesley 100” essay, and would greatly appreciate some last minute feedback, so if you are willing please let me know, thanks!!!

Hey! I applied as a transfer too, sorry I just saw this. What did you write about?

hey! I wrote about “ambitiously huge projects” and “the way in which we have your back”. what about you? @barçafan2016 ?

@studyglot I wrote about the Wellesley Center for Women and Globality! I’m hoping we hear back sooner than late May, I am so anxious!