URGENT: Why Duke Essay?

<p>Hey guys, I need a handful of people to read over my Why Duke (CAS) essay. It’s short and sweet—just need some feedback because I have to submit the supplement within the next hour in order to be eligible for an interview (I have to go to a party and, like Ke$ha, when I leave for the night, I ain’t coming back). My essay is rather….informal, and I just want to make sure that I’m not “insulting” the adcoms with my writing style. Just comment on here and I will PM you!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Hi! I can take a look at it for you if you’d like. I don’t currently attend, but I was accepted and visited last spring, and I have a couple of friends who go there.</p>

<p>Send it to me.</p>