Urgent?

<p>Anyone please willing to proofread and give the last few tips on my supplementary essay to Bates? Hugs and kisses from a Latvian applicant in return :)</p>

<p>dear theaferi, i know when u are going to submit your apps, and you want it to be cross checked…but i suggest you otherwise…im an bates hopeful and i asked my anonymous “friends” to check my essays but many of them gently turned me down…see, i dont see them as being rude but i see their point- you dont wanna disclose your supps to other guys…its YOUR WAY OF WRITING AND EXPRESSING YOUR UTMOST DESIRE TO ATTEND BATES…
just get it checked by your reliable teachers, close seniors, or anyone that you feel comfortable sharing it with…this essay can make or break your essay, be careful!</p>

<p>and, ALL THE BEST! :D</p>

<p>Oh thanks for your advice, but you see, I just don’t want it to be full of silly grammar mistakes :(</p>

<p>Have it checked by an adult who knows the admissions process in US colleges.</p>