UrGENT

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hi guys, I have a small question I'm describing my activity which is Student Council President in the Activities section of the common app... and i'm wondering if this sentence is correct to describe my activity.</p>

<p>I serve as the primary representative, advocate, and liaison to the our schools community.</p>

<p>(I'm intl, so english is not my first language, and for some reason this sentence seems kinda weird to me..)</p>

<p>THANK YOU!!!!</p>

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<p>It’s fine except you need to take out “the” between “to” and “our”.</p>

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<p>thanksssssss!!!
ohhh hahah thats why it sounded weird, i haven’t slept in a while, thats probs why I oversaw it</p>

<p>again thank youu!!! <3</p>

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<p>No problem! Good luck! :)</p>