<p>I just finished my essay for the usc application.
Will anyone read it and give me feed back?
I would REALLY REALLY appreciate it!</p>
<p>I’m trying to write my USC essay as well, which one did you write on and what was your topic?</p>
<p>I was deciding between the first about whats important to me and why and the second about a project that shows my voice and I ended up choosing the first.
I basically wrote that growing up in a poor unstable family I have found that what is most important to me is stability, basically working hard and going to college so I have a stable future. Or I guess not letting my parents mistakes discourage me or hold me back from having a successful future. Which sounds unoriginal but I tried to make it stand out. I need someone to read it and tell me if I should change it haha
What are you thinking about doing?</p>
<p>Oh that sounds good. Yeah I’, super worried that anything I write won’t stand out. I’m doing the first one as well, I think I’m writing about this camp I worked at for 3 years and how it made me learn responsiblity and hard work and showed me how to be a leader and all that.</p>
<p>actually, I changed it. I decided to write about my first cross country race.</p>
<p>haha I changed and rewrote mine so many times
Either sound like really good topics
good luck</p>
<p>haha thanks! If you want I can proof read your essay for you and see how it looks.</p>
<p>I chose the first prompt too.
And I wrote about my parents seperation… How it affected me but overall how it made me a stronger person. 
Do you guys want to read it?
I’ll read over yours if you like? :D</p>