USC Long essay... desperately need help

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my USC essay and it feels a little disconnected, will anyone read it and help me?</p>

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<p>Which prompt did you choose?</p>

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<p>I chose the prompt that says, "Newton’s First Law of Motion states that an object in motion tends to stay in motion in the same direction unless acted upon by an external force. Tell us about an external influence (a person, an event, etc.) that affected you and how it caused you to change direction. "</p>

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<p>i'll read if you want</p>

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<p>send it over if you need</p>

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<p>i'll help :D</p>

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<p>I would like to read^^</p>

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<p>love long ones, lol, pm me ^^</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>I just recently edited it... any other readers? please?</p>

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<p>send it on over</p>

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<p>i'll read</p>

<p>pm over</p>

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<p>i'll read it, PM</p>

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<p>i'll read it..i'm also doing the same topic</p>

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<p>sounds like an interesting topic. i ll read it</p>

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<p>I can help you read ur essay</p>

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<p>I wrote about that one too</p>

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<p>sure, ill read it.</p>

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<p>I too would like to read it. I am a prospective SC student and I just so happen to be writing on that topic as well. I just need to finish my UC applications first.</p>