USC Transfer Essay Help!

Transfer Students
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Hi guys! I would appreciate any feedback on these two short essays I’ve typed for the writing supplement for USC transfers. :slight_smile:

  1. USC students are known to be involved. Briefly describe a non-academic pursuit (such as service to community or family, a club or sport, or work, etc.,) that best illustrates who you are, and why it is important to you.

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  1. Describe your academic interests and how you plan to pursue them at USC. Please feel free to address your first- and second-choice major selections.

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I do not recommend sharing your short essays here because it’s not safe!
You can PM it to me and I can offer advice there. :slight_smile:

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@mochibbycake how do you PM? Sorry I don’t go on often, so I’m not that familiar with the site.