UVA SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY?!?!

<p>Could someone please look over my essay and tell me is it's any good? It will be very appreciated! </p>

<p>Prompt: Describe one of your quirks and why it is part of who you are (approx. 250 words)</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you want, pm me (I applied early action, so I can’t copy) </p>