UW MADISON college admission essay

Hey, wondering if anyone is willing to rate my college essay on two of the prompts below. Let me know if you guys are willing so i can privately message it to you (don't want my essay to be surfing around the web).

Consider something in your life you think goes unnoticed and write about why it’s important to you.

Tell us why you decided to apply to the University of Wisconsin–Madison. In addition, share with us the academic, extracurricular, or research opportunities you would take advantage of as a student. If applicable, provide details of any circumstance that could have had an impact on your academic performance and/or extracurricular involvement.