VERY Asian essay, anyone interested?

College Essays
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<p>No, it's not about grades or immigration or whatever, but it is about Asia. I really like it and am thinking about using it for common app and make it fit one of the six categories. Would love some (very critical) feedback.</p>

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<p>sure, i'll take a look...PM me</p>

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<p>sure, i'd be willing to take a look at it</p>

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<p>yeah I can give u some feedback. PM me</p>

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<p>ide love to take a look.</p>

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<p>I'd like to see how an Asian essay reads.</p>

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<p>Me as well, very interested! Just PM.</p>

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<p>i would love to read it, and I make detailed comments!</p>

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<p>pm me, i can read it and give you advice.</p>

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<p>Pm me, i will give you advice</p>

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<p>PM me please</p>

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<p>I'm asian and I should be able to relate well and tell you whether your essay really has an asian feel to it or not.</p>

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<p>haha im asian too! u can pm me if u want me to see it :) sounds interesting.</p>

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<p>I'll read it!! Pm me!</p>

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<p>i'll read it! PM me</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>PM me? "asian" essay sounds interesting hahaha</p>

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<p>I'll read it too</p>

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<p>haha im asian - ill read it!</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>