VERY Personal College Essay in Need of Review =)

College Essays
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<p>Hey there CC,</p>

<p>So i recently completed my common app essay about a subject that is very dear to me and that has had a very significant impact on my personality and life as a whole.</p>

<p>However, I am not fully convinced I was able to relay my feelings and thoughts effectively enough, which is where i need help.</p>

<p>If anyone who would be kind enough to read my essay and share their thoughts on the impact and help me improve it, i would appreciate it GREATLY</p>

<p>Just post on here if you are willing and I will PM it to you ASAP!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance CC,
Dino</p>

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<p>Ill read it. Just PM me the essay and prompt.</p>

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<p>Thanks Koalakitten, anyone else willing to help me?</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. i’m writing something personal too and its hard to convey emotions in 500 words.</p>

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<p>Sent and thanks =)</p>

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<p>i read your essay but can’t PM you back because i apparently don’t have enough post. I didn’t know if you wanted me to discuss your essay in a public forum, so i copied and pasted my response into a word doc. let me know how you would like to get it.</p>

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<p>Ill read your essay. I can send u mine too if u want</p>

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<p>what email is that? all after the @ symbol its all ************</p>

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<p>its g m a i l</p>