Very rough CommonApp essay

College Essays
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<p>Anybody willing to read, critique and offer feedback on my VERY rough essay? I had so much to say but got it down to exactly 500 words.</p>

2

<p>sure, can u read mine?</p>

3

<p>I sure will.</p>

4

<p>I’ll read it and give feedback. PM me.</p>

5

<p>PM me. I might not be able to get back right away; I’ve been super busy lately. :P</p>

6

<p>Sure, PM me.</p>

7

<p>I’d be happy to, pm me</p>

8

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

9

<p>I’ll read.</p>

<p>10</p>

10

<p>You can send it to me</p>

11

<p>Ill read it! PM it</p>

12

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

13

<p>I’ll read it! (PM me )</p>

14

<p>Thanks for all the offers but I was hoping I could get some parents or current college students to read it, as opposed to current applicants or soon-to-be college applicants. I probably should’ve mentioned this in my first post. :o</p>

15

<p>I’m currently applying BUT I took a writing course this summer at Brown and believe that I can help! :)</p>

16

<p>I’ll read pm me</p>

17

<p>yes sure :)</p>