<p>Any harsh critiques out here??
Thanks :)</p>
<p>Ok
Not applying to Cornell and got nothing to do while someone proofread mine !</p>
<p>Thanks 
Anyone else??</p>
<p>I can read it over for you.</p>
<p>I can read it if u want as well, not applying to aem…pm me</p>
<p>Thanks a lot guys :)</p>
<p>Any other good critiques??</p>
<p>ill read it- im applying to engineering–pm me!</p>
<p>if you still need a critic…</p>
<p>sure I’ll read it, pm me</p>