<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>Well, I just finished my first draft of my common app essay. It is just short of 600 words. I am a decent writers, but hate/am terrible when I write about myself. So, if anyone would be kind enough to edit my essay for Yale SCEA, I'd GREATLY appreciate it!</p>
<p>Robbie</p>
<p>I’ll read it for you! I’m a newspaper editor so I should be fairly helpful. Want to PM it to me?</p>
<p>Hey I tried to PM you my suggestions, but your inbox is full…sorry</p>
<p>I’m ready to critique your essay…just send it over…</p>
<p>you can email me</p>
<p>pm me, but be warned ahead of time that i’m a harsh grader.</p>
<p>yellowismellow- lol I want you to be VERY critical of my essay! It is kinda still in its preliminary stages right now.</p>
<p>I’ll read it - PM me</p>
<p>Sure! Just PM me. I can help you with your concept and the message you are trying to get across.</p>
<p>PM, I’ll give you a good paragraph of feedback.</p>
<p>sure, send it to me</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>ill read it!!! just PM me.</p>
<p>sure PM me!</p>
<p>you should be careful about just sending your essay to anyone that agrees to read it not only because they might take some ideas, but because it will affect how you feel about it when people are constantly critiquing…i kept mine mostly to myself and it was more personal because I did that, and it worked out in the end :)</p>
<p>ill read it if u want</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>Sure, PM me! :]</p>
<p>I’d love to, if you still need any help.</p>