<p>I wrote it and know it's super rough, but am going to do a lot of revisions in the meantime.
Bearing this in mind......would anybody like to see it!?</p>
<p>i'll only pm just in case lol.</p>
<p>thanks!! :)</p>
<p>constructive criticism is openly welcomed btw!</p>
<p>no, not really.</p>
<p>that’s not a good idea.</p>
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<p>You’ll get better tips there. Good luck</p>
<p>I would love to see it :)</p>
<p>I would be really careful JeremyBeach…</p>
<p>I’m sorry but what’s with all the paranoia? Can someone tell me how one can jeopardize someone elses chances by reading their admission essay? </p>
<p>PLEASE.</p>
<p>ah you guys are guilting me into not sharing it !(it’s not so good that’s why i want someone to peer edit it haha)</p>
<p>acutally how about i revise:</p>
<p>i’ll trade essays–and we can revise each others :)</p>
<p>Can I see your essay?</p>
<p>@lilaterila</p>
<p>if the UC receives 2 identical or nearly identical statements, both candidates are immediately disqualified. i know it’s probably highly unlikely that someone would steal your personal statement, but why take the chance?</p>
<p>im down to read it!</p>
<p>Um sorry but I don’t want to steal anyone’s essay, I don’t need to. Thanks.</p>
<p>i’m having second thoughts to be honest :-</p>
<p>I’m just gonna read it. I wanna see what kind of essays I’ll have to write to compete.</p>
<p>The UC advisors (Cal & UCLA) I met last week said letting other students read your essay isn’t the wisest decision. I don’t recommend it.</p>
<p>I’m not gonna read your essay.</p>
<p>lmao
i feel badly now
but come to think of it maybe it <em>isn’t</em> the best idea to have other UC applicants peer edit it.
I’d ideally love to! But…in the case somebody felt like they liked it and wanted to steal an idea it would be plagiarism, just like if I Saw someone else’s
i dunno
i sent it to 10 friends on the east coast (where i’m from ) so i’m hoping that’ll do the trick :P</p>
<p>I was going to copy your essay and use it as mine so that both of us get disqualified.</p>