Want critiques for my Harvard additional essay

<p>Im an international applicant and just about to be done with my application.
Please take a look at my essay.
I would really appreciate thoughtful comments/harsh criticism!
PM me or comment and I will send you my essay.</p>

<p>aight pm me</p>

<p>Ill read it</p>

<p>no prob- pm me</p>

<p>PM me, :slight_smile: please.</p>

<p>PM me and I’ll see</p>

<p>*how I can help</p>

<p>I was an international applicant. I’ll read it.</p>