<p>My deadline is January 1st, but I am not finished fixing it up myself. Can I reserve a spot for your opinion?</p>
<p>My deadline is January 1st too, I really need it critiqued! I will PM you my essay.</p>
<p>I have 2 deadlines for Jan 2nd, can I PM you a couple essays too?? Thanks!</p>
<p>spongebob or anyone here— i can edit/critique/comment on your essays as well. i am an 09er, but am pretty bored right now and would definitely never under any circumstances steal your essay. i’m pretty good at English/write in my spare time. pm if you’d like some help. :D</p>
<p>Supertme41, Humna, Cristana89, Juanmarco, modo822, crunkk: Your essay revisions should be in your PM folder. This might have been my favorite batch so far. </p>
<p>I still have a dozen or so essay requests in my PM folder, so if you haven’t PM’d me yet, it’s highly unlikely that I’ll get to yours before the third of January. I didn’t expect that so many people would take me up on my offer! </p>
<p>Here’s the “batting order” as it stands right now. The higher up your name is on the list, the earlier you sent your private message (or the more urgent your request is)–and the sooner I’ll critique your essay. </p>
<p>Note: if you submitted two essays, I might only be able to comment on one of them.
Important note: if your name is not on the list, but you are sure you messaged me earlier, try sending your request again. My inbox was filled to limit a few days ago, and your essays might not have made it into my message box. </p>
<p>Dennyssampler
Paradiso
Klynchhhhh
Michael92
Justintsn
Chaucer91
Claireee
Anhtimmy</p>
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<p>Since it’s not confidential or anything, you can just post it here. That would probably be a better way to get a more broad level of critique anyway.</p>
<p>Ahh, I didn’t see this thread until just now. I know you have tons to read, but I’m desperate for another opinion, so I’m gonna PM you. I couldn’t find any legit people to respond to my thread.</p>
<p>Here’s where I stand as of late:</p>
<p>Dennyssampler—Essay critiqued
Paradiso–Essay critiqued
Klynchhhhh–Essay Critiqued
Michael92–Responded to in e-mail
Justintsn–Essay Critiqued
Chaucer91–Brief Statements Critiqued
Claireee–Essay Critiqued </p>
<p>All I have left now to do are fullpotential, bananapacker and piefaced’s essays, which I should be able to look at before the deadline. I’ll accept TWO MORE REQUESTS from people whom I haven’t critiqued before, but that will be it for Jan. 1 deadlines.</p>
<p>So quick! Send in your PM if you’d like to be critiqued by tomorrow! If you’re one of the “lucky two,” I’ll PM you back.</p>
<p>Ok I sent you a pm, although I forgot to mention that it was for a Jan. 2nd deadline.</p>
<p>I PMed you! :)</p>
<p>hey i495
i tried to pm you but your inbox was full
i just wanted to say thanks so much your help! your feedback was really useful and my statements are going to be a lot better</p>
<p>An update on my progress:
Fullpotential–Essay critiqued
Bananapacker–Essay critiqued
Piefaced–Essay critiqued
Ouch123–Waiting on the essay
Corgonin–Essay critiqued </p>
<p>Once I look at Ouch123’s essay, I think I’ll end there. These edits can take quite some time (each is about 400-700 words), and I have a substantial amount of homework to do in the next few days. For those of you whose essays I didn’t look at: my apologies! I hope that you can find someone to critique them. </p>
<p>At any rate, thanks to all those who submitted essays for review. I learned a lot from the editing process, and I hope my comments will make a difference.</p>
<p>:) your edits were very helpful
thanks so much!</p>