Want to edit my college essay?

<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>I'm a rising senior (not a parent) who needs some advice on his essay.</p>

<p>Please pm or message below if you would like to help me edit it. I'll
PM you my essay.</p>

<p>I posted this in the college essays forums but the people who visit
there are mostly high schoolers who don't seem to have the experience
that parents can offer :)</p>

<p>Any help is appreciated!</p>