<p>Hey guys. The title is a tad misleading, this is actually not the essay I'm planning to use for the Common App; I have one that I put much more heart into (topic: person who affected you) that I will use for that. However, for this one school that I'm applying to, I need both essays. I'm in the top 1% of my class, so as a Texas resident I'm guaranteed admission into the university, and I'm more or less guaranteed a spot in my major. So, since I was only going to use this essay for a school that I'm sure to get into, I wasn't inclined to put much work into it. In any case, I thought it would be wise to have some of you guys look over it. If you wouldn't mind doing so, I'd really appreciate it.</p>
<p>Also, I don't want to sound like a snob, but I'm only planning to private message this to people who are long time CC members. I'd hate to have it stolen and get denied by my safety school. :</p>
<p>Thanks
-Michael</p>