<p>Would anyone be willing to read my CommonApp essays and give me as much criticism as possible? I'm deciding "where I want to go" with these essays, and some guidance would be greatly appreciated! Definitely willing to swap as well(;</p>
<p>i can read it</p>
<p>I can proofread your essay, if you’d like. PM me</p>
<p>I can too 
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<p>Sent from my Nexus 7 using CC</p>
<p>i will do it</p>