<p>Hello!
Does someone want to take a look at my rough rough rough draft of the Pomona essay?
Tell me if it sucks. I think it might.</p>
<p>Sure, pm me.</p>
<p>PS: I am also interested in Pomona, but I already sent in my application so you don't have to worry. :)</p>
<p>Thanks! Anyone else?</p>
<p>Thanks for reading my essay-I'd be happy to read yours too.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>Send me a PM</p>
<p>bump</p>
<p>Anyone who wants to give feedback, not just... see it?
Thanks</p>
<p>I'd like to read it. I can try and give feedback...I'm definitely qualified enough for Pomona though haha</p>