Want to review "I like being asian" commapp essay?

College Essays
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<p>Please help me review this beast. I really hope I don't miss the mark with it.</p>

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<p>Ill read it</p>

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<p>As a fellow asian, id be glad to read it =P</p>

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<p>haha i wrote about my struggle being asian in a white community, so i'd love to read this. PM it over if you'd like!</p>

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<p>PM it to me and I'll go over it.</p>

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<p>I got deferred with this essay, so I think I can help you some. PM it over.</p>

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<p>As an Asian, I would like to read it!</p>

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<p>hey i have a "i like being asian" common app essay too! want to trade? i kind of want someone to look over mine too if you dont mind</p>

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<p>i will read it too. email it over. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>Sounds fun. I'm Asian too XD PM it to me please.</p>

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<p>fellow asian! Please pm it over I'd be glad to read. Thought of writing on my ethnicity but might it sound regurgitated? If not tackled well the diversity/ethnicity issue might sound copycat..I myself am not confident enough.</p>

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<p>its funny how every "Asian' on this thread has to make the OP know they are Asian...as if being Asian could provide better insight</p>

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<p>PM it to me.</p>