Wanted: Essay Criticism!

<p>If anyone is willing to help me wrap up my essay (conclusion), and give some feedback about what is already written, please don't hesitate to post in this thread!</p>

<p>I'd love to hear other perspectives on what I'm doing :)</p>

<p>since you’re willing to help me, I’ll help you out too ! :)</p>

<p>PM me I’ve got a pretty good eye for grammar</p>