~~WANTED: harsh critiques

College Essays
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<p>Can anyone read my USC essay? I know they will only be reading it for about 1-2 minutes. I want to know if the message I want to convey comes out in my essay. As for the grammar, I think it's okay. I just need your opinion on whether it's too boring or not.</p>

2

<p>sure i can do it.. just send it privately to me</p>

3

<p>pm me ill read it</p>

4

<p>I can do it if its not too late.
Yale EA admit and bored :)</p>

5

<p>send it over</p>

6

<p>If you PM me, I'll send you my email address.</p>

7

<p>pm it to me.</p>

8

<p>Hey PM me if it isn't too late!</p>

9

<p>I'll try critiquing it</p>