WANTED: Someone to critique my Common App essay :)

College Essays
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<p>This is my initial essay for the Common App, topic #1. I will PM you it you volunteer. Feel free to rip it to shreds :)</p>

<p>ANY TAKERS?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>

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<p>send it - ill take a look.</p>

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<p>Thanks, you guys. I sent it! CRITIQUE IT SO HARD</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to take a look :3</p>

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<p>Send it my way!</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look!</p>

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<p>Sign me up!</p>