<p>It's about 500 words in response to this prompt:</p>
<p>A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.</p>
<p>I'm not too confident in it yet so don't be afraid to hurt my feeling :D</p>
<p>I’ll take a read</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
<p>Anyone else up to the task…</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>i can take a look!</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>Thanks for the responses, I’ll definitely send it out once I do a total overhaul based on other suggestions (:</p>
<p>Send it over!</p>
<p>Ill read and critique the best I can!</p>
<p>Ill proofread it.</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to peer edit back, just ask! :)</p>
<p>Looking for any sort of constructive criticism still. Be as (honestly) mean as you would like, this could really be an opportunity to let off some rage while helping me out!</p>
<p>ill read it :)</p>
<p>Still looking for feedback on my ever changing essay…</p>
<p>i’ll give it a shot</p>
<p>I’ll do it!!</p>
<p>Just looking for one or two more people (I’m rather thorough :P).</p>
<p>I’d be happy to peer edit anyone else’s also.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it!</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to read it and make edits if necessary. Just PM me.</p>
<p>Hey wanna peer edit? So far its just been my mom reading over mine…and she says the same thing repeatedly :P</p>