was wondering if anyone would help me improve my essay

<p>i chose the quote topic.just wondering if anyone is interested.</p>

<p>hi TK - its poetree you helped me with logging in a password. i was at fsu this weekend and it is way cool. when i asked about the the essay during the info session i got the impression they read it only if a student who applying is borderline.anyway fsu campus is amazing. if you want me to comment on quote i would be happy to. i am a strong creative writer</p>