Weight loss as essay topic?

<p>One of the prompts for the common app essay topic is "Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?"</p>

<p>I wrote an essay about how I lost weight, and then gained it back. Its one of my biggest failures in life. Do you think it's a good topic? Also, if anybody could take a look at my essay that would be great!</p>

<p>*I reposted this cuz I didn't know if my other post was visible.</p>