<p>Hi guys. </p>
<p>I have just completed two Common App supplement essays. I am looking for someone to critique my essays' focus and overall effectiveness. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>If you feel comfortable sending them to me, I’d be happy to give you some feedback.</p>
<p>Anyone else? </p>
<p>Sure, pm me if you want some feedback.</p>
<p>Bump. </p>
<p>I can read it.</p>
<p>Mhmmm</p>
<p>Feel free to send them to me. I would be happy to proofread and analyze them. </p>
<p>Which schools? If they are schools I applied to/got in to, you can send them to me. I will read them, provide feedback, and send you my supplements for those schools. Let me know!</p>
<p>I can read it</p>