Wellesley Essay Proofer?

Applying to College
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<p>Would anyone like to take a look at my Wellesley supplement essay? I don't know if it's too cute or grovelling. Post here and I'll PM :)</p>

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<p>i'll read. PM me</p>

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<p>i will, too.</p>

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<p>i would take a look</p>

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<p>ya, hit me with the essay</p>