<p>Hey guys, hope you're all doing well and enjoying yourselves. I have just started my junior year in high school, and would like to get some feedback on what people think my chances are so far at a top UC school, namely Berkeley and UCLA (maybe even Stanford? doubt it though). Thanks!</p>
<p>Note: This is a projection of my final resume, meaning I have filled out some of the categories based on if I were to get those results or grades by the end of Junior year.</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): 2100-2300 (most likely, I've taken practice tests)
[</em>] ACT: N/A
[<em>] SAT II: World History 740, Mathematics II 750,
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.8, weighted ~4.1
[<em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
[</em>] AP (place score in parenthesis): US Hist (4), World Hist (5), Environmental Science (5), Eng Language (5)
[<em>] IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
[</em>] Senior Year Course Load: AP Calc AB, AP Comp Sci, AP Physics B, AP Statistics, AP English Literature, History 4 Honors, Advanced Dance
[<em>] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): 1st place overall champion in category at Showstoppers National Dance Competition 2012(does this count?)
[/ul]Subjective:[ul]
[</em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Studio Dance 4+ years, Guys Dance Club/Crew (Co-founder), Persian Cultural Club (Founder), farsi (Persian) class for 7+ yrs, Self taught computer languages (Html, CSS, C++, Objective-c) and a several apps on the itunes app store, app club, Tourette Syndrome Association Youth Ambassador (I have tourettes), Civic Leadership Council (school community service, leadership)
[<em>] Job/Work Experience: Family dry cleaning business for 2 summers, Unpaid internship at a Biotech software company 1 summer ~2 months
[</em>] Volunteer/Community service: ~200 hours at local food kitchen, ~50 hours teaching dance to underprivileged children at a school, Civic Leadership Council member, Summer immersion trip to Peru, Charity event organizer at PledgeToHumanity + directed several fundraisers/events ~100 hours
[<em>] Summer Activities: job and internship mentioned above, dancing, boxing
[</em>] Essays:
Haven't written them yet, but one will be on having tourettes syndrome, how I have always been very self conscious and introverted because of it's symptoms and how it has affected my learning, but through doing dance as a guy and having to do things such as interpretive dancing (making up a dance to song you have never heard before in the middle of a room with many people watching), breakdance, hip hop, and forcing myself to perform, I have overcome a lot of my fear. Also, through charity work, and a particular campaign where I helped raise $ for kids that have facial deformities, I hope to try to inspire self-confidence in other kids.
Animes like Dragon Ball Z and Pokemon that I grew up with have shaped the majority of my morals and I wouldn't be nearly the person I am today without them. They are set up in an idealistic world, and people like to submerse themselves in anime to get away from hardships of reality they have to deal with. The difference between and a dreamer and doing something is taking what you value in the anime/manga/whatever any other thing in life and facing the cold hard reality, change the empathy, love, pride, and moral growth you learn from anime that the creator intended, and convert it into real life, keep the spirit of the anime alive, become the incarnation of the hero, change the world like they do.
Any other ideas I come up with...</p>
<p>[<em>] Teacher Recommendation: Hasn't happened yet, but I'm bound to get a great one from an english teacher
[</em>] Counselor Rec: Hasn't happened yet, but will
[<em>] Additional Rec: from Biotech software company
[</em>] Interview: N/A</p>
<p>[/ul]Other[ul]
[<em>] State (if domestic applicant): CA
[</em>] Country (if international applicant):
[<em>] School Type: Competitive private, ~150 per class
[</em>] Ethnicity: other (Persian)
[<em>] Gender: Male
[</em>] Income Bracket: +150k
[li] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): none</p>[/li]
<p>[/ul]Reflection[ul]
[<em>] Strengths: Tourettes syndrome, male dancer, extra curric's
[</em>] Weaknesses: Grades
[<em>] Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected:
[</em>] Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected:</p>
<p>[/ul]General Comments: My intended major as of now is Computer Science. Hopefully I did this right, lol. Hope to get any feedback at all, thank you in advance! :)</p>