<p>This is the link of my personal statement.
It is what I submitted for my transfer UC application.
I'm applying to especially Cal and Davis... with a low GPA :(
I worked spent a lot of time writing this so i hope they will like it...
Do you guys think it's good? :/
Please tell me what do you think, although I already submitted it. Thanks~!!
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=160LxcaOJtIpJopHqwaVqvyQffs_jSUv0er23wa-WBOU%5B/url%5D">https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=160LxcaOJtIpJopHqwaVqvyQffs_jSUv0er23wa-WBOU</a></p>
<p>so no one’s willing to respond to it :/?</p>
<p>I guess… At least no one says it’s really bad…
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<p>i thought it was ok</p>
<p>I hope it’s good… </p>
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<p>I skimmed over it and I think there’s some tense errors scattered around. And the flow is kind of choppy (probably because of all the commas). Just my input~</p>
<p>GL</p>
<p>I actually had a eng professor to look over my final draft… Then I had to cut down 90 words myself two hours before I sent it. Anyway, thank you. I’m wondering if the content is good or bad </p>
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