What do you think about my essay

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<p>So I had an awful subject for my essay, so i bit "rape one of my exapmles" to fit my essay.
I wrote 2 full pages though </p>

<p>Topic: something with how too much knowledge and data lead us to less understand how or environment or the world is truly is </p>

<p>opening: ( even manage to put some fancy words)
Too much knowledge/information/data lead to misunderstanding the world and/or distort our perception of the world.</p>

<p>Ex 1
The war in Gaza strip- too much information from too many TV channels and news websites, lead to too many versions of the same event that some are bias some are not but because we have too many of those we don't know what to think what is true, and therefore too much information lead to misconception of what really happen (I think this ex is sweet)</p>

<p>EX2
a documentary movie about "shopping babies" online, we can buy online sperm eggs and even surrogates and by a click order a baby that will be ready in 9 months. now I rape it and say the the abundance of information make us wiser and we now know about a lot of things that we thought were in the region of sci-fi, this leads to a beclouded area of right and wrong and to a distortion of what really should be "ok" in the world. Therefore too much information lead to a misconception of how we should behave in the world</p>

<p>conclusion</p>

<p>restated my thesis with a bit "by analysis and although there are virtues the vices are..."</p>

<p>Can I still get an 8 +</p>

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<p>hey im guessing u took the sunday test becuz i also had that prompt…can u pm me so we can discuss the test further (answers, etc.)?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me as well as for the test I don’t remember most of it I have like a blank in my head about most of it </p>

<p>I had 2 writing section and I hope section 2 is the experimental because it was brutal:
Ill be online again in 6-8 hours :)</p>

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<p>Potter, I like the support you present, so I wouldn’t worry too much if you present it in a rational and proficient way.</p>

<p>:]</p>

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<p>thanks RedCatharsis
Well my essay is not perfect and I don’t think Ill get 11-12. But I hope for 8+</p>

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<p>Now that college board published the topics
[SAT</a> Essay Prompts](<a href=“College Board - SAT, AP, College Search and Admission Tools”>College Board - SAT, AP, College Search and Admission Tools)
I got prompt 3</p>

<p>can someone tell me if from what I wrote above I somehow can still get 8 on my essay using those examples (in an assumption that everything else is ok?)</p>