<p>Thanks so much everyone... This was my first attempt at my essay and I only worked on it for maybe an hour at the most, so I am sure it will get much better, with help... I really do appreciate all of your suggestions. :)</p>
<p>Thanks so much everyone... This was my first attempt at my essay and I only worked on it for maybe an hour at the most, so I am sure it will get much better, with help... I really do appreciate all of your suggestions. :)</p>