What do you think of my Personal Statement?

<p>Anyone who is OLDER than class of 08', could you please read my essay? It expresses how my circumstances have influenced who I am today, but I need to know what kind of tweaking it may need.</p>

<p>Reply if you could help me out.</p>

<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>

<p>Ill read it for you, Pm me.</p>