What examples did you use in november 2009 essay???

<p>Can someone give me a score range on my essay from my description? I’m in the same boat as 2014…</p>

<p>My prompt was about popular culture.
Introduction was 3 sentences and I agreed that popular culture accurately shows society’s opinions or whatever the prompt was. Made some connections to mob mentality.
First BP was about A Raisin in the Sun and how the events that happened in that time period affected how the family was treated and that the events further endorsed racism and discrimination against blacks.
Second BP was about political cartoons and how politicians use them as propaganda to real in voters. I briefly talked about Join or Die and how it showed that most colonists wanted to revolt and the ones that originally didn’t were swayed.
Third BP was only 3 sentences about Ellison’s Invisible Man. Pretty much said the same stuff that I said in the first BP paragraph, but I talked about Ras the Exhorter making speeches in the streets and how white supremacists forced the Narrator to further live underground.
Conclusion was something along the lines of: “After a careful analysis of A Raisin in the Sun, political cartoons, and Invisible Man, it is evident that popular culture indeed expresses society’s views accurately. If popular culture did not have as great of an effect as it does, history would not be nearly the same.”</p>

<p>My last body paragraph & conclusion were really short and the overall essay was 1.5 pages. Am I as doomed as I think I am?</p>

<p>No idea what score you would get, but it is <em>reel</em> in voters, not <em>real.</em></p>

<p>Not being a spelling nazi, just pointing out that it might effect your score if you wrote it like that on the essay.</p>

<p>Oh thanks for pointing that out. I don’t think I used the phrase “reel in voters” so that stupid mistake shouldn’t be a problem, thank god.</p>

<p>I was omgosh I have nothing to write for that and then I just used my how it affects my cousins negatively (wrestling, internet) and myself positively (musically inclined [smh should have said those 2 exact words in my essay]) based on my experience. 4 para all together.</p>