<p>I want to give it a 4.5 if I could. There are some grammar/punctuation slip-ups, and the sentences aren't varied enough. Maybe more elaboration on your examples would be nice, too.</p>
<p>I want to give it a 4.5 if I could. There are some grammar/punctuation slip-ups, and the sentences aren't varied enough. Maybe more elaboration on your examples would be nice, too.</p>