What score should this ESSAY get? HELP!!

Test Preparation
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<p>Try practicing essays on 35 min. You'll do much better. The try to make it down to 30min, 25min, and 20min as you get used to it.</p>

<p>Well, I'm not that good at essays either. My score is usually 9 or 10.</p>

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<p>i actually thought i did better on the 2nd essay than the first...</p>

<p>hmm
thx for the insights :)</p>

<p>I appreciate everyone whom is willing to spend some time to give me advices, thx</p>

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<p>in the last para u gotta write why???? are ppl driven by their conscience</p>

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<p>is this an essay for d sat1 writing section?
if u need serious help with the essay then tell me i got the whole thing ready</p>