Where Did You Choose To Go?

Colleges & Universities A-Z Johns Hopkins University
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<p>Well for my essay, I wrote how I would go to the Art Studio of my High School because I never get to do Art, although I love it and its my favorite thing. I put a lot of painterly imagery in it to give it creativity. </p>

<p>Just a litte passage I really like: </p>

<p>"By the end of the day, I go to bed dreaming of brushstrokes and swirls of rainbow colors, the sky raining hues of ink, a candle drawn of pitch black charcoal and emitting sable dust, houses constructed out of textured clay, the sky wrapped in ribbons of white; and it is all running away from me." </p>

<p>I put that I would take my father becuase he left me when I was a baby. I also put that I'd use my art to fix my relationship with him..etc...</p>

<p>The only thing I didn't put in there was the amount of money I'd take with me. I did, but it didn't go with the creativity and I felt that there was no place for it in essay. And besides, who needs money in an art room? I hope it won't hurt me though.</p>

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<p>Aww....that sounds like a really nice essay. Mine's too private to post on here :)</p>

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<p>O.o i feel soo bad i never addressed where the money came from =(...because it got too complicated...</p>

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<p>Yeah I'd post my whole essays, I just don't trust people on the internet. No offense though.</p>

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<p>Just a reminder...
...it is STRONGLY DISCOURAGED to share your responses to essays on internet forums. This is a practice that is frowned upon by Admissions professionals. Plagiarism is just one of the many concerns we have about such actions.</p>

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<p>Oh. I'm sorry, I just thought it might be fun since I found posts like this one last year.</p>