<p>i've been working on this essay for two weeks. the thing is, i haven't been getting much done. i freewrote for a while to brainstorm, then did a little cleaning up. now i DON'T KNOW WHERE TO GO! i feel like i've missed the prompt, or that my essay won't make sense even as i edit and rework it... i don't know where to go and i'm looking for someone to read my VERY ROUGH draft and help me out a little bit. this is the only piece of major writing i've got left! (i'm applying ED, so my application is due November 1st) </p>
<p>post if you've got any advice/want to read my draft. don't be afraid to give me strong criticism. i can handle it, you won't hurt my feelings! i promise! </p>
<p>i'm a bit concerned, because it's not about the traditional sort of 'significant experience' i've been reading others' essays on.</p>