Which essay do you think is better? 2013 kids and older please!

College Essays
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<p>So I currently have 2 common app essays that I have started... would anyone be willing to read them for me and tell me which one of the 2 you prefer, as well as give me an honest critique of one or both? </p>

<p>Just PM me if you'd like to read. Thank you!</p>

<p>Oh, and a warning, writing is NOT my strong point... but I'm working at it, ha.</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt</p>

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<p>Sure, just PM me.
I’ll give feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure, send me a PM. I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you feedback, PM me!</p>