Which Essay Format Is Better?

<p>Haha I was just about to ask the exact same question. I tried writing 3 examples but I saw that I was going to run out of paper so I shortened them by a lot so I lost some quality on them. And even though I shortened my last 2 examples, I still didn’t have room to write my complete conclusion! Really ticked me off…</p>

<p>I got a 10 on my last essay with that situation…I’m trying to find a better approach so I can pull it up to 11 or 12</p>