<p>I've written two essays for the CommonApp and I am having trouble deciding which one would be better to submit. One my mom likes and my dad doesn't, and the other one my mom is iffy about it while my dad likes it. I'm applying to some selective schools so I really want to make sure I submit the right essay! I would really appreciate it if some of you guys could read them over for me and tell me which is better + ways to improve them. Comment here and I'll PM them to ya. Thanks!</p>
<p>I will have a read, give you one more opinion. 
PM me.</p>
<p>I’ll read, if you like. :)</p>
<p>Sounds interesting to me, send it over if you’d like</p>
<p>PM me! I’d love to look them over</p>