Which is the better of the two essays?

College Essays
1

<p>post and i'll send both to you</p>

2

<p>I'll be glad to look them over and give you an opinion.</p>

3

<p>I'll take a look if you'd like</p>

4

<p>I will read them! :)</p>

5

<p>i ll read them=)</p>

6

<p>I can give you my opinion.</p>

7

<p>bump. i took the better one and revised a lot</p>

8

<p>i can help out; i usually am very critical</p>

9

<p>I'll read it! PM me.</p>

10

<p>PM me. I"ll read it.</p>

11

<p>PM me, i wanna read</p>

12

<p>i'll read them</p>

13

<p>bump (10char)</p>

14

<p>I would love to read!</p>

15

<p>PM me i wil read em for ya</p>

16

<p>I will take a look.</p>

17

<p>send it to me</p>

18

<p>I'll read.</p>

19

<p>It's good you have a choice! Pm me, I will read them</p>

20

<p>i'll help if u want...feel free to PM me</p>