which one for penn,chicago,(maybe) princeton?

College Essays
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<p>what a miserable christmas...doing essays. i have two essays to use as the personal statement, but a little nagging voice tells me that they're not good enough. can someone read both and tell me which one is better or if i should write a completely new essay? thanks so much.</p>

<p>6 more days and this miserable ordeal will be over...</p>

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<p>I'll check them...</p>

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<p>Sure, PM them.</p>

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<p>ill read em.</p>

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<p>Sure. PM them</p>

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<p>Il give em a read</p>

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<p>If it makes you feel any better, I'm doing college essays on Christmas as well! Solidarity! :-9</p>

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<p>I'm workin on college essays as well... just pm me.. im bored.</p>

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<p>im bored to PM away.</p>

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<p>bump bump bumpin it up</p>

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<p>I'll read them, but include your email address in the PM so i can email back a corrected version.</p>

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<p>ill read it just pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read them as well, just pm!</p>