Which one should I use for my common essay!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

<p>I wrote two 500-word-essays for common app , and I cant decided which one's better (or which one's less worse...!!! xP) </p>

<p>does any EDs want to read and tell me...!????? PLEASE??
Im in hurry. I have like 4 hours left before the post office closes! and they dont even open tomorrow....</p>