which should i foucus on my essay

Applying to College
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<p>Hey guys I plan to write an essay about an important change in my life. Is it better to focus on the struggle in my mind to decide to make that change or to focus on the specific approaches to fulfill that change after making it?</p>

<p>I have a lot to write on both of them, but i think it will be better to just focus on on.</p>

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<p>well...i think internal struggle is better...cause you wanna display your character via describing that</p>