Who interested you in Brown please edit no 2014ers

College Essays
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<p>GLAH my essay is 800 words -.- can someone please read it and give me feedback as to what i can get rid of? thanks! :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! =)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me!</p>

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<p>If you’re looking to trim down your essay, you should start off with sentence structure instead of hacking away your ideas (which are by far the core of the entire essay). You can PM it to me if you wish and I can show you some my Brown essay (although I got rejected from Brown) but got into Columbia.</p>

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<p>Sure Id love to read it</p>

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<p>Hey I’d love to read it! Pm me.</p>

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<p>Dude, there is no way you can write 800 words on “Who Interested You in Brown” without straying batantly away from the topic. Just answer the damn question and do not get overly creative or anything.</p>

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<p>The '09-'10 supplement hasn’t been released yet, has it?</p>